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A Few Notes on that Final Step

This week I reviewed the copy edits from my upcoming Samhain Horror novella, Blood Red Roses. Finishing the process, there are two insights I want to share with other authors, especially indies.

1.      You need a copy editor.

You don’t think you do. Hell, I don’t think I do. But every manuscript I get back from my publisher proves me wrong. And I don’t mean you need one for minor typos, though you do. The copy editor is the master of mechanics, the one who, day after day, works with the grammatical nuances of our mother tongue. We butcher these details in our everyday speech, and as a result, like a toxic spill, those shortcuts leech in and contaminate the wellspring of our writing. With each line edit, I curse myself for mishandling the language, for forgetting one of English’s equivalents to baseball’s infield fly rule. Then I vow to never repeat that Freshman Comp mistake again. But I do.

 

2.      The copy edit phase is cool.

You say you hate it. The fun, broad strokes of creativity you loved to wield in your first draft are already painted. This is just scut work. More than likely, by now you’ve shepherded the story through three drafts plus, and you are much more excited about whatever new project simmers on the front burner.

But this is the chance for detail. The editing process also raises questions of continuity, of clarity. Did you really mean this? Didn’t your character previously say that? With a bit of your earlier unbridled enthusiasm banked, you can take a final, detailed look at those passages in question, and go break out the dusty thesaurus for the perfect word. Look at this as one last polish, the brush of the dust speck off the hood before you roll a classic car before the judges. Here you have final say on the finished product, something many movie directors and rock stars don’t have. Enjoy it! 

That’s all. Back to that new story that has captured my imagination.

Can’t wait to see the copy edits.

BloodRedRoses cover

 

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Closing a Circle

The most amazing parts of the writing experience continue to arrive unexpected. 

In 1987, I was flying Blackhawk helicopters for a living with the U.S. Army’s 101st Airborne Division. My unit was deployed to the California desert, in training for the future wars that started a year after I outprocessed. We spent about forty five days living in the sand. Peacetime army stuff, no comparison to what more recent veterans have accomplished. 

About midway through this deployment, I was informed that a chaplain had come by and dropped off a box of brand new paperbacks. I didn’t know where they came from, or how he decided we’d get them. I gave everyone in the company a shot at the treasure trove. The books disappeared until only two books were left. 

One of them was Gods of Riverworld by Phillip Jose Farmer, the fifth and final book of his Riverworld series. They are a great set of sci-fi books about a world where everyone ever born is resurrected. I’m pretty sure that there are no other books where Mark Twain and a repentant Hermann Goering share the stage. I’d finished the fourth book of the series a few months ago and could not believe my good luck. 

So for days, I spent my free hours in the blazing desert reading about people in a riverboat on an alien planet. Dozens of other soldiers were transported to other places at the same time. Good books unleash that amazing power of the human imagination in a way that movies and video games just can’t. I’d always appreciated the effort someone took to provide an escape for soldiers serving their country, but I didn’t know who to thank.

This week, the amazing author Joe Kinney clued me in that he had a route for shipping books to soldiers in Afghanistan. Coincidentally, those soldiers serve in an aviation brigade, just like I had, out of Fort Drum, NY, where I’d done plenty of winter training. So I packed up copies of my novels and sent them off. 

So while I could never thank anyone for sending me to Riverworld one last time, I was able to do the next best thing, and complete the circle I’d entered over twenty years ago. Maybe there will be a guy on a cot reading my Black Magic next week who will one day send his novels to a new generation of warriors. Stranger things have happened. 

Authors who want to send copies of their works overseas can send them to: 

SGT Baugh, Mark

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Parallel Lines Now Free At Daily SF

Drop by the Daily Science Fiction website and read my speculative fiction short story PARALLEL LINES for free.

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Interview With Damien Grintalis

I snagged an interview with Damien Grintalis, author of INK.  Check it out.